Kenshin Himura....

[LadyRukia]

i drew Kenshin Himurahttp://forum.bleachtactics.com/picture.php?albumid=768&pictureid=5885

[Freedom_yuuki]

i guess it's okay maybe try to draw lighty first than use like a pen or fineliner to go over it after you finish it ^^"....................

[ChaosReaper7]

its good, but u should do what freedom said, draw light lines first then darker ones over, also, try to level everything out, like if the heads one size make the eyes hand and the rest proportionit..also, dont make so many lines for one thing, as in dont make 3 or 4 lines for one side of the arm, this happens to me. Sorry for all the critiscm, im a drawer to ^^..ill try to upload my drawings to show all of you

[LadyRukia]

thanks for the help you guys