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_Dave_
04-08-2008, 05:45 PM
This will help everyone to improve their gfxing skill, commenting and giving constructive criticism on the tag.

RULES- no talking bad about their work simply notice what they are missing, or need improving and what's too much. oh and remember we don't want NUMBERS.

-Halla

Rasta_Boy
04-08-2008, 05:54 PM
Ewwww lmao jk

I like the pen tool alot , and the blue tree (lol blue tree)xd
Text ish awesome, depth is A too ,
OVerall pretty FIne

giantKon
04-08-2008, 06:23 PM
I like the colors. The lines on top of text look really-really good, but it would look even better if they would blend even more with the text (right now you can see the starting points of the lines). Backround - just awesome. It really fits with the font and the color.

Rasta_Boy
05-08-2008, 05:16 PM
I like it
Nice text
NIce blending
Nice depth

Kepp workin good dude.

Yoruichi10
06-08-2008, 11:59 AM
i like the userbar its a good blend and its symmetrical

Tousen_Kaname
06-08-2008, 06:49 PM
I like it a lot very creative:) I wish I can gfx like, but I think I'm never going to be at the level where your atT-T.

Mataa
07-08-2008, 08:27 AM
red text? O.o lol red is a bad combination with a blue bg xD and its a bit blury as well xD

Alkemi
07-08-2008, 08:32 AM
Text a bit small for me but its still pwnsome ^^

Freedom_yuuki
07-08-2008, 09:31 AM
i like but bit too bright just a little and txt kinda takes away the attention of gin

Enko
07-08-2008, 04:21 PM
bottom one is better than the top the sasuke one is too messy IMO

giantKon
08-08-2008, 09:13 AM
Speechless.. There's nothing bad or anything too much. Everything is.. balanced.

Yoruichi10
08-08-2008, 11:12 AM
you need to work on the text and back ground needs work.

Andreea
08-08-2008, 04:42 PM
~ i dont like the text
~pretty colors ^^

giantKon
08-08-2008, 07:09 PM
really really messy, in my opinion.
text looks really good, and fits in.

_Dave_
08-08-2008, 08:04 PM
nice style but too small ,text placed wrong place color balance other then dat nice sig

-Halla

SethUchiha109
08-08-2008, 08:12 PM
It's ok, quality is bad though. I know it's vector but I suggest adding a little more on the sides.

Yoruichi10
08-08-2008, 11:07 PM
9/10 it is 3D and the background is fantastic.

Reborn
09-08-2008, 05:32 PM
i really have nothing bad to say about the sig maybe the color blending though:o:eek:

Andreea
09-08-2008, 05:58 PM
- i dont' like the border

- bad text

- pretty colors ^^

giantKon
09-08-2008, 06:13 PM
Same thing : D..
35 Characters
35 Characters

Andreea
09-08-2008, 06:54 PM
umm its cool , but kinda dark XD

Enma_Kon
09-08-2008, 06:57 PM
omg cool XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD not plain not dark its perfect

hitsugaya_toushiro
09-08-2008, 07:14 PM
if itz kon it has 2 b a 10 on 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

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Andreea
09-08-2008, 09:26 PM
~bad text
~too blue XDD
~kinda plain o.o

UnknownMercinary
09-08-2008, 11:06 PM
Ohhhh i like the explosive red really pretty, but its kinda hard to see some of the stuff because of the white-ing. I like the text but the red part is a little hard to read. (that is just in my opinoon of course im no expert) :)

Reborn
09-08-2008, 11:08 PM
render doesnt go with background=o:eek:

Andreea
09-08-2008, 11:50 PM
i dont like the border , bad text , pretty colors ^^

SethUchiha109
10-08-2008, 12:20 AM
I like the lightning and the effects good text and good background, doesn't seem to need a border though.

tray1223
10-08-2008, 12:22 AM
nice colors and good lightin jus turn down the contrast 8

_Dave_
10-08-2008, 01:00 AM
i should whip u for makin dis , bad color,clear the noise, not feelin de dark spot and using dat many(same person) render in dat space bad choice.
come tray i've u make better sig

Addiction
10-08-2008, 01:04 AM
its really awesome o:
not much to say about it, cept maybe some c4ds could have livened it up?

caz
10-08-2008, 01:07 AM
8/10. xD
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_Dave_
10-08-2008, 04:27 AM
its really awesome o:
not much to say about it, cept maybe some c4ds could have livened it up?
nah c4d will too much on dat it i like it dis way lol thbx tho

@cez we ain't lookin for numbers dats de reason i put on CNC der is another topic fo that

UnknownMercinary
10-08-2008, 04:34 AM
Your signature creeps me out ... i dont know why though but it does *good job on it but its creepy....... :(

TRuSaint
10-08-2008, 07:51 AM
Sig #1 Is an overall nice sig... nice flow ;) 8.5/10
Sig #2 I don't like the background or the text, it doesn't look good with the render 4/10

Freedom_yuuki
10-08-2008, 08:28 AM
Sig1:
I love it but a bit too bright in one of the spots kinda bleacds in

Reborn
10-08-2008, 08:53 AM
i love both sigs there is nothing wrong with dem:o

_Dave_
10-08-2008, 09:01 AM
nice style nice flow nice color but clear the noise sharp a bit work on text mate

Freedom_yuuki
10-08-2008, 09:11 AM
ahh it's cool the txt placement is good and the i luv the smoke and c4d

Andreea
10-08-2008, 12:51 PM
#1 its perfect ! =O
#2 it's kinda plain , umm and i dont like really much white&black sigs XDD

purechakra1
10-08-2008, 01:34 PM
I like it Nice Texture and choice of colors

Andreea
10-08-2008, 01:50 PM
umm kinda plain , bad border and text XD

Enma_Kon
10-08-2008, 02:05 PM
its perfect =P
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rangiku
10-08-2008, 02:21 PM
ok i like the lights in youre sig..the writing is ok and i like naruto thats very cute

Andreea
10-08-2008, 02:27 PM
ummm not sig , just a pic XDDD

Enma_Kon
10-08-2008, 02:34 PM
XDD again ok i like the effectsXDDDDDDDDDD

Keeny
10-08-2008, 09:57 PM
Its colorful =O xP
The text could be improved though =x and it need depth i guess o-o

Andreea
10-08-2008, 10:21 PM
i like it , but bad text XDD

BoOoO
11-08-2008, 12:02 AM
is nice but bad text o.o

Andreea
11-08-2008, 12:05 AM
ummmmm not sig >_>

Keeny
11-08-2008, 01:25 AM
Its so nice i can't even describe it O=

Andreea
11-08-2008, 01:29 AM
i like it , but bad text XDD

Keeny
11-08-2008, 01:53 AM
Its so wonderful i can't even describe it X=

giantKon
11-08-2008, 08:17 AM
Yeah, bad text and the bottom should be blurred less or less optic ( I really can't get, what it is ). But the backround is just.. amazing.

Andreea
12-08-2008, 07:07 PM
not sig o.o

Addiction
12-08-2008, 07:24 PM
theres nothing to CnC o,o
its like a perfect 10 xD

Andreea
12-08-2008, 07:30 PM
umm i like it , its cool x]

CaptainAizen
13-08-2008, 04:38 AM
the sig above me iz pretty good. i give it a 8.5/10. i like the colors.

jonatangh
13-08-2008, 04:55 AM
like the top one better .

CaptainTousen
13-08-2008, 06:16 AM
Who doesnt like chucky haha
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Andreea
13-08-2008, 01:19 PM
~bad text
~ messy
~border sucks XD

skyhawk19
13-08-2008, 03:10 PM
if just voted ur ava l.....................ike ur sig to tho

Andreea
13-08-2008, 03:14 PM
umm its too dark and bad text o.o

CaptainTousen
13-08-2008, 06:53 PM
Like it but the text could show a lil more

Andreea
13-08-2008, 08:07 PM
~bad text
~ messy
~border sucks XD

Enma_Kon
14-08-2008, 01:15 PM
i like it xDD
a little to lighty xD but very nice

Rockster100
14-08-2008, 04:22 PM
Awesome!!!
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Andreea
14-08-2008, 06:05 PM
~text sucks
~i dont like the colors
~plain

L2v5
15-08-2008, 02:06 AM
-Background owns
-Text is too little (I barely can see it)

Not much things to say about your awesome sig :)

Andreea
15-08-2008, 02:25 AM
~bad border
~kinda messy
~i dont like really much the text x]

giantKon
16-08-2008, 02:42 PM
Andreea can't get the point..
In my opinion, your being rude. Only saying what's wrong, not saying how to make it better.
Messy as hell, looks like an newspaper.
Border's horrible.

Andreea
16-08-2008, 05:01 PM
its cool i love the colors ! x]

ZangetsuX
16-08-2008, 05:04 PM
well i like urs andreea i can't really tell wat it is but it's still pretty kool

Andreea
16-08-2008, 05:58 PM
not sig , just a pic .

ZangetsuX
16-08-2008, 06:10 PM
yea i no mine isn't very good i don't really care about it as long as there's something there i'm fine

Andreea
16-08-2008, 08:52 PM
not sig , just a pic .

Itachi_Uchiha
16-08-2008, 09:20 PM
nice background
awesome render XD
text a bit 2 small
border looks nice

Andreea
17-08-2008, 06:37 PM
-kinda plain
-bad text
-bad border o.o

Addiction
17-08-2008, 10:38 PM
its really good idk what to say o,o

Andreea
17-08-2008, 11:00 PM
its cool but i dont like really much the text x]

Sandmanxx23
21-08-2008, 07:48 AM
Too messy, looks dirty imo.
No blending, looks like a wet newspaper.
xD

omiray
22-08-2008, 07:14 AM
9/10 i love pokemon and it has a good backround

ZangetsuX
22-08-2008, 04:48 PM
7/10 i like the background!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

giantKon
22-08-2008, 06:29 PM
Let me know, when there's a signature that I could comment ; )).

triplew
22-08-2008, 06:48 PM
8/10 interesting avatar looks kinda creepy though but good detail ^_^

ulquiorra21
26-08-2008, 06:35 PM
i like the top sig better the bottom one is just useless u cant see ichigo's face and its plain bad text but keep the top one i like it

Sandmanxx23
26-08-2008, 06:51 PM
The text is horrible, you brushed over the render, something you should never do.
Its way too messy, the c4d useage sucks.

misterSado
01-09-2008, 07:03 PM
it doesn't flow all that well its randomish , and whatP random light, but its nice and hmm colorful

vash812
01-09-2008, 07:23 PM
^MisterSado
You can't fail if you never try

Since my sig wont show http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m81/Vash812/BeserksigV1copy.png

Amatsuka
01-09-2008, 07:36 PM
Its ok. Colors are bland and boring.
I like vibrant colors :D
Good sense of flow.
Text is a bit boring and too static for me. :/

Sandmanxx23
01-09-2008, 07:55 PM
....Same as before.
Nice depth, not feeling the colors, and the focal is way too big.

orochimaru
01-09-2008, 10:08 PM
7/10 its ok
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Amatsuka
01-09-2008, 11:06 PM
Why bother posting if you've already rated mine. Thats just...-gag-

Anyhow, I like the simplicity here. Text is a little small. Maybe my eyes are just bad. I do think SOMETHING should be in the background besides pure white. Depth is well represented otherwise.
Border is a little gaudy too.
8/10

misterSado
01-09-2008, 11:30 PM
hmm its kinda plainbut I like it , it has peaceful vibe , and maybe make the shine in eyes dif. color

Sandmanxx23
06-09-2008, 04:29 PM
You dont have one so o.o.
Get a signature is my CnC. =o

carsonnik
08-09-2008, 12:23 PM
The lighting isn't great, way too bright. It might look better darkened. 7/10

Sasuke61694
11-09-2008, 12:49 AM
I like it, but text needs some work, it's a bit bright, a little messy, but other than that it's cool

ZangetsuX
11-09-2008, 02:24 AM
number 1 is 8/10 but the 2nd one is a little hippe 6/10 but that's not the problem it's sort of bland 2 me

Madvillian
11-09-2008, 03:42 AM
7/10 Render little blurry plain in like blend kinda way but yea

Sasuke61694
11-09-2008, 05:10 AM
I like the concept and I havn't seen too many sigs of him, it's also a fairly unique style and it blends well, for CnC I guess I would say to learn somemore effects and try to incorporate more into your sig

UnknownMercinary
13-09-2008, 05:21 AM
Ive rated you before and i think i gave an 8/10 and 7/10 so yeah there it is!!!

I know what your thinking: "Those sigs are so amazing, i cant let him know of my jealousy so ill say they suck." But i know what your really thinkinging so HAH!!! :):):):):)

ngl619
20-09-2008, 02:04 PM
the text and border needs work

Afro
20-09-2008, 02:30 PM
I like it it describes a bit how creative you are well done :)

giantKon
21-09-2008, 07:07 PM
Aaaaw, so good looking but bad quality. Text isn't the best too : //.
Other than this , 9/10

UnknownMercinary
25-09-2008, 06:06 PM
OK Kon i decided to like bygons be bygons and im gonna drop all the crap between us.
9/10 for the skill level/quality but the actual picture doesnt *intregue* (screw spelling) me that much so 8/10 overall.

Alkemi
26-09-2008, 03:45 AM
Border needs work ... Text needs work... font needs work. Text is WAYYY to small on the bottom left. Plain.

clangers
26-09-2008, 06:53 AM
a sig that glows of greatness makes me feel bad about mine.
Meant to tell you how to improve but i aint a genious in graphics and if it improved anymore my head would explode multiple times (yes it would reform then explode again)
10/10

giantKon
26-09-2008, 02:10 PM
@UnknownMercinary- It's nice of you to "drop all the crap" : ).

But clangers, your signature is just an screenshot with an text on it.

UnknownMercinary
27-09-2008, 12:10 AM
Border needs work ... Text needs work... font needs work. Text is WAYYY to small on the bottom left. Plain.

@ the guy above me i would cnc or w/e but i already have plenty of times plus my comp isnt letting me see any pictures right now so i couldnt if i wanted to.

I know my text needs work it always does, i dont pay attention to borders, and the text in the bottom is supposed to be small its my little indent into my sigs saying that i made it. Its on all my recent ones.

clangers
27-09-2008, 01:38 AM
@UnknownMercinary- It's nice of you to "drop all the crap" : ).

But clangers, your signature is just an screenshot with an text on it.

its actualy not a screenshot...... watch all the eps ill doubt youll find it. If you do i didnt take it from there.

Murdoc
27-09-2008, 03:46 AM
2/10... im sorry but i really dont like it, and u have no lessons to teach for u have no quotes to write for you have no imagination to think and without thinking you are...
IGNORANT

Alkemi
27-09-2008, 03:58 AM
0/10 You didn't make it... Just a pic... No text. No border.. No bg... XD

Hithero
27-09-2008, 10:19 AM
9/10 I Think It's Pretty Awesome :D

giantKon
27-09-2008, 10:56 AM
@Clangers- That won't make it suck any less : ) .

@Hithero- I like the render, where di you get it : PP? But looks kind a epmty, there's about 3 brushes used on it only : //.

Murdoc
27-09-2008, 03:28 PM
0/10 You didn't make it... Just a pic... No text. No border.. No bg... XD

Do you not know? a signature does not have to be a picture that u make but something expresses your self, when that has been done, you have reached true respect for your self

EliteHitsugaya
27-09-2008, 04:16 PM
@Murdoc:0/10 Nothing good about it._.
@GiantKon:9/10 Nice Sig^^
@hithero:10/10 Thats An Awesome Sig you have Hit^^
@Alkemi:9/10 Good Render^^

giantKon
27-09-2008, 07:04 PM
@Murdoc- None likes smarties you know.. And as we know, there are unwritten rules for a signature. Yours is just an RENDER with a white, plain, boring and empty background.

But Hitsugaya, too bad you don't have a signature : ((.

EliteHitsugaya
27-09-2008, 07:12 PM
@GiantKon-I don't have A sig I know I have A PlayerCard,and something that says EliteHitsugaya on it

Murdoc
27-09-2008, 09:44 PM
then i will go make a signature and be back with an awsome one, or i could just use and old one.

giantKon
28-09-2008, 08:18 AM
Too dark, messy and one-colored. That other dude in the left is really hard to notice when you do a one-sec-look-on. Text in the other hand is really good, position isn't the best but not bad either.

Alkemi
28-09-2008, 10:42 AM
Great sig. I love the colours! The lines on the right i hate them =.= xD

giantKon
28-09-2008, 03:42 PM
Darn it. I thought it will look better 'cos that place at right looked kind a empty to me : DD. I used some kind of an scan line brush.

You signature. Fantastic render, where'd you find it : OO?! And again, text text text! It looks bad ; ((.. But the background feels kind a empty, but other than this, I don't know what makes me like that signature alot.

Ulquiora4
01-10-2008, 03:29 AM
huh maybe a 8/10 not bad colors looks nice...

Edward_Elric
12-10-2008, 03:34 AM
Its too blury and the text isn't that great.The logo needs to be cut.

Freedom_yuuki
12-10-2008, 04:33 AM
7/10 the background is kinda messy and flow is kinda distorted but it's okay

ashashi
28-10-2008, 11:44 PM
8/10 nice BG, render and bla, bla, bla. Might look even prettier with border thou

Suzaku
30-10-2008, 10:22 AM
7.5/10

A bit empty in the middle

giantKon
30-10-2008, 04:16 PM
Everything's like, really-really perfect, but that grunge vector curve at the left looks really really bad, especially with that ugly glow. I'll give it a 8/10.

SethUchiha109
06-11-2008, 04:19 PM
Uhm, I really cant see the stock or render or whatnot. But I really like the sig/tag. The background is kindad simple but eh, it's ok. 8/10

Hyonimaru
06-11-2008, 08:13 PM
Yah. I get to criticize Seth.
=D
Lol.
I like everything. Background is kinda plain for me though.
8/10

_Dave_
07-11-2008, 05:00 AM
Seth sig isn't plain, just the style of vector.

anyways your sig-
lack of, depth, flow, light source, text, blending. oh and render--> doesn't fit you at any way! lol

am pretty sure you can do better compared to your mix tape shit! that was good.

you both keep it up.

wow, first time i posted in my own Topic ever since i made it! xd

Gokurules
11-11-2008, 07:31 PM
what could i possibly cnc about its awesome

Hyonimaru
11-11-2008, 08:38 PM
@Dave..
Shushh..That's a old siggy.
=P
Lol..
Same as my current one also.

~Now doing the Goku..I think it needs a better blend.
Im not feeling the Yellow and Blue.

giantKon
18-11-2008, 05:52 PM
That stock/render looks stretched and the text isn't good. But I LOVE IT. It looks so good. Like, those colors .. UGHH, It's too good!

Freedom_yuuki
19-11-2008, 09:20 AM
very bright no focal giantKon just wasn't your day right? 6/10

giantKon
19-11-2008, 04:48 PM
Well, I like it and I don't care what others say. It's not like I'm doing them for others to see -.-".. And I don't get those focal points :?
I don't know about the colored version but I'd say it would look better. There are 2 places ( shoulder areas ) that make the render/stock feel so called "out of space". But still, I like it and it's 8.5/10.

Hitsugaya09
27-11-2008, 01:39 AM
awesome it looks ok 2 me nice work

Hyonimaru
27-11-2008, 01:45 AM
I don't like the background.
Better blend would do good too.
Change that black text to be more readable.

UnknownMercinary
27-11-2008, 01:50 AM
im pretty sure CnC means Critique and Credits? Or something like that so ima say...VERY NOICE i loves it, a fraction distorted but i still love it. Only main thing i dont like is the shine in the top left but other than that G R E A T !!! SUPERMAN FTW!

giantKon
14-12-2008, 02:39 PM
There are so many things that I dislike, and nothing that I like so I won't better start with my thing, I'm gonna save you from this : ).

Suzaku
14-12-2008, 02:59 PM
9/10

I like the whole sig put together.... and who is she? Your Gf?

giantKon
14-12-2008, 03:07 PM
I just found that stock you used on your signature and I like the fact that you've add some effects by yourself do it too. Again, scanlines- don't use them to fill up empty spaces. Same thing goes to that halftone thing. It's like that signature is only half made- I don't feel the background, it's too empty. I like the text, really cool effects under it. And the white glowing brush on the right side- too random.
8/10 IF it had a good background : ).

Maybe she is, maybe she's not.

Suzaku
14-12-2008, 03:12 PM
I didn't know what to put there..... I NEVER do in empty spaces!!!! T_T

giantKon
14-12-2008, 04:17 PM
Fact stays, and the same comment.
*hint* I've a new signature, CnC it *hint*

Suzaku
14-12-2008, 04:25 PM
I like it too 9.5/10... what would you recommend me to put in the empty space of my sig?

TRuSaint
14-12-2008, 04:26 PM
I love the flow and the background on that sig ;) I would add more to the left side
9/10

giantKon
14-12-2008, 07:10 PM
@Suzaku- if you can use C4D, then try it, if you can't.. then still, give it a try : DD. But you can use abstract and grunge styled brushes with different layer effects.

@TRuSaint- It kind a looks blurred and that's what bothers me the most. And it has that techno/future-styled background which really doesn't go with Ichigo. And that font, it's supposed to be used on size 12 and with "None" text effect (text effects- sharpen, crisp, strong, etc.).

7/10, sorry, but that's how it is.

Amatsuka
30-12-2008, 11:40 PM
Cool stock!
The text is almost invisible. I'm a more upfront text kind of guy :P
It's a nice piece of work though.
9/10

Hellcats666
01-02-2009, 08:29 AM
9/10
I like the coloring and shades. I would say the background is totally barren but considering the show is based in a desert it makes sense to have it look like that i guess. I like how the text is prominent without being a distraction. The eyes on vash are also nice looking. I don't see to many problems with it that don't fit with the actual style.

Bo0ts
10-02-2009, 03:52 AM
It's a giant kon work... nothing i can comment on... Its beautiful...
I love the render aswell~

10/10

UnknownMercinary
01-03-2009, 10:10 AM
A Little bit too dark boots, but overall good. I especially like the text although you made it the main focal point.
8.2/10

ColdLightnin
10-04-2009, 12:03 AM
A lot of paintbrushes but it look good to messy and crappy render..
7/10

rumjello
12-04-2009, 03:28 AM
awsome 8/10 the clash of blue uhh im not feeling it

BlackVizard
12-04-2009, 03:36 AM
like the color and the brightness i think it totally goes with the smile thats on her face also like the effect used on the right side of the sig xD

this is taken from the first post in this thread by the thread starter Dave

This will help everyone to improve their gfxing skill, commenting and giving constructive criticism on the tag.

RULES- no talking bad about their work simply notice what they are missing, or need improving and what's too much. oh and remember we don't want NUMBERS.

-Halla

Hellcats666
20-04-2009, 10:09 PM
6/10

The text needs work and the background doesn't blend and/or flow with the render very well.

SoulVenom
05-05-2009, 08:25 PM
seen it b4 2/10...............

Hyonimaru
05-05-2009, 08:30 PM
Change the background, Change the text. More depth, and more blending as well.

lastave
23-07-2009, 06:28 PM
Shouldnt you kknow whut Photo EditingSystem they use first befoe you rate it

acidrain11
23-07-2009, 06:47 PM
uuuh no plus this isnt the rating thread its the cnc thread photo editing system doesnt matter at all.

sasorifan1
06-09-2009, 03:02 AM
idk whos in that that sig but work on the blending but i still like it 6/10

Aexon
18-09-2009, 06:49 AM
the first one is good. the second one is nice but i don't like the things on the right of hinata. it kinda throws it off for me.

Pauratagashi
20-09-2009, 11:57 AM
I like the Daisuke sig, the different colored lights do add to the sig's appeal. However, I feel that the depth still needs a little work. You can barely tell that there's a shadow on his pants. Also the sky on Daisuke's left side looks quite dull and unsaturated. Perhaps, adding a bit of dark blue to it and putting it on soft light or overlay? Or maybe multiply at a very small opacity? Anyways, it's still pretty good and I do like the color choice.

Bo0ts
24-09-2009, 01:31 AM
Good sig overall, Text is bad, more depth would be good, Render might be a bit too light.

Aexon
24-09-2009, 01:52 AM
need to learn how to blend c4ds. smudging them won't work all the time. should sharpen the face a bit more and the purple is random

Hyonimaru
24-09-2009, 01:53 AM
Needs more effects, better blending, and a better focal to me.
Bo0ts render doesnt need to sharpen, i think it's fine if he's working with dark colors.

Pauratagashi
11-10-2009, 03:45 PM
The sig is stretched too wide and squashed down. Also the fact that it's just a manga scan and nothing was added or messed with kinda bugs me.

Veevin
27-11-2009, 10:20 PM
Certainly a messy piece. The lighting needs a lot of work because the random light sources doesn't appeal to the focal itself. Needs work on composition and effects basically. The text doesn't really give out that much which is alright but it's sort of not what it needs. Take out the bar at the left because it's interrupting the concept of the piece. The borders around the whole piece is pretty thick, I suggest on making the border at least 1 pixeled.

Karma
28-11-2009, 10:12 AM
It's messy, but you worked it out with a great focal point. There isn't a certain light source here. That C4D on the left (that retro colored) kind a disturbs me.. Way too out-standing I guess.